The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart compares the expenditure of weekly income of families in an unknown country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, a big proportion of money was spent on food in 1968; Linking Words
however
, in 2018, Linking Words
highest
percentages of expended money were for housing and leisure.
In 1968, 35% of the weekly salary was used Correct article usage
the highest
in buying
food; Change preposition
to buy
however
, six decades later, the figure fell by half. Weekly allowance for clothing and footwear Linking Words
were
double that of the value in 2018, at 10%. Change the verb form
was
This
trend was the same for personal goods, where it was 8% in 1968 and 4% in 2018.
Families in 2018 expended between 19% to 22% of their weekly Linking Words
earning
on housing and leisure, Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
whereas
in 1968, it was 10% and 8% respectively. People, in 2018, spent more on transport than in 1968; Linking Words
however
, the figures for household goods were Linking Words
same
in both years at 8%.
During both periods, money utilized for fuel and power was fairly similar at about 5%.Correct article usage
the same
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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