The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010

The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010
The line graph illustrates the production of energy coal in Sweden, France,
Denmark
and
Germany
between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that
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all of them decreased in the
last
period.
Although
, in the middle was showed fluctuations by four countries. First things
first,
Denmark
and
Germany
have the same patterns. 1995 saw it
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at around 55% and 60%, respectively. There was a gradual decrease in 1998 to 35%
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Denmark
and 40%
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Germany
. After that, the energy production from coal declined slightly from 2001 to 2004 with
Germany
at 30% to around 15% and
Denmark
at just below 25% to 20%.
Subsequently
,
Germany
reached a low of energy coal at around 5% in 2007. Fortunately, It climbed to approximately 18% in 2010.
In contrast
, there was a sharp incline from 20% in 2007 to 10% in 2010 by
Denmark
. Following that, the other groups are Sweden and France. Mostly, all of them decreased slightly from around 35% in 1995 to just below 30% in 2010 by Sweden. After that, France decline slightly from 30% in the first year to just above 20% in the
last
year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words denmark, germany with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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