It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

There is no denying the fact that nowadays, public spaces play a crucial role in our lives.
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task achievement
Make sure to elaborate on your points with specific and relevant examples. Using examples not only helps support your main points but also demonstrates your understanding of the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph flows logically into the next. Use more varied linking words and transitional phrases to improve cohesiveness.
coherence and cohesion
Consider refining your introduction to clearly state your partial agreement and perhaps briefly outline the main points you will discuss. This will enhance the reader's understanding of your stance.
introduction
The essay presents a clear argument and intention right from the beginning. The introduction is concise and establishes the stance of partial agreement.
logical structure
You have a balanced approach, considering both sides of the argument which is good for a well-rounded essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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