The two tables below show the statistics of workers of foreign and us birth in the United States last year. Summarise the data.
The tables given below show the statistical information of the past year regarding the workers born in the US and foreign respectively.
Overall
, the data given in the two tables is categorised based on age, gender, and the rate of employment in two different populations. The unit of measurement is in thousands.
Of the workers of birth in the US, over the last
year, the majority of the workforce consists of 129,533 people of which 117,095 were employed. This
was mostly dominated by males aged between 45 and 54, who comprised 17000 employees in total. While
, the females comprise 61,923 individuals, who were not far behind their male counterparts.
In contrast
, people who were of foreign origin were employed in the USA and were relatively on the lower side. The total number of individuals in the workspace is 24000 of which males are making up the Major masses. Whereas
, the women are in the second position standing with 8000 employees of the field. Of the total data acquired majorly were of
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