Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many are of the view that tertiary students should read
courses
of their preference. A school of thought holds in perception
that, programs that are relevant in the future should be thoughtCorrect article usage
the perception
.
The essay will elaborate Change preposition
of.
both
views.
Change preposition
on both
To begin
with, everybody one
way or the other is competent with some qualities and skills that differ from other individuals. One
may be perfect in other course
Change the wording
another course
other courses
while
others tend to perform poorly, society cannot insist that these people should read the subject from my own perspective. For
instance
medicine and Add a comma
instance,
health related
Add a hyphen
health-related
courses
whiles
someone could go for nutrition that can eradicate future health conditions Change the verb form
while
such
as diabetes and hypertension. Again, from the level of AI
each individual has Add a comma
AI,
its
own level of IQ since we are always not the same in terms of academics. Correct pronoun usage
their
his
her
For
instance
some students are excellent in maths but perform poorly in social studies. The Add a comma
instance,
one
good at mathematics should be encouraged to read maths related
Add a hyphen
maths-related
courses
than social studies.
In contrast
, parents must involve their wards in decision making
concerning their preferred course, kids nowadays are keen Add a hyphen
decision-making
to
science and technology Change preposition
on
due to
the robotics movies and articles read everyday
. Replace the word
every day
Furthermore
, subjects being thought
in the university are equally productive and need to avoid discrimination. Some people believe that reading social studies is a waste of time and will not take Verb problem
taught
one
anywhere forgotten that gaining idea
about it can lead Add an article
an idea
one
to a successful politician and broad knowledge about the environment and planet as a whole.
To conclude
, parents must give their children adequate opportunity to select their own courses
, all subjects being thought
at the universities are equally productive and each individual Verb problem
taught
possessed
different levels of IQ in terms of selecting programs which is something that must not be overlooked.Wrong verb form
possesses
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
Expand on your ideas to make them clearer and more comprehensive. Using detailed examples and explanations can help achieve this.
task achievement
You have presented both views on the topic, which is a strong point for your task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Your essay contains a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in presenting your arguments in an organized manner.
Your opinion
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