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The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps present an industrial
area
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 in Norbiton and some suggested changes for
this
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area
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 in the future.
Overall
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, the Norbiton industrial
area
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 is planned for major innovations which turn it
to
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into
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 a residential
area
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. At present, there is a river in the north of the
area
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 where the surrounding land is used for farming. The plan is going to replace
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 farmland
area
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 with houses and roads.
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, a new bridge will be built across the river in order to connect
this
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 newly built
area
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 to others. The most major change will happen in the
center
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 of the
area
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. Here, all the factories will be removed and new housing will be constructed. The large roundabout in the
center
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 will remain unchanged, yet there will be new shops and a medical
center
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to
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 its southwest and southeast sides, respectively. Houses are
also
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 built along the road to the east side of the
area
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. There
are
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is
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also
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 a new playground and school.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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