IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Recently, it has been claimed that ordinary
people
Use synonyms
 could produce
art
Use synonyms
;
however
Linking Words
, it has
also
Linking Words
 been argued that designing
art
Use synonyms
 could only be approached by those with innate talent.
Overall
Linking Words
, numerous technological tools support humans in creating
art
Use synonyms
 now and they could attend
classes
Use synonyms
 to learn how to produce works of
art
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, possessing
skills
Use synonyms
 alone is insufficient to create true
art
Use synonyms
, which
could
Wrong verb form
can
show examples
 only be produced by inborn artistic talents. Currently,
people
Use synonyms
 are efficiently assisted by advanced technological tools in designing artworks, and they
could
Wrong verb form
can
show examples
 participate in
classes
Use synonyms
 to learn
art
Use synonyms
skills
Use synonyms
. Artificial Intelligence, known as AI, has been publicized widely, and it could use algorithms to successfully collect data and
could
Verb problem
apply
show examples
support
people
Use synonyms
 in creating 3D paintings, making animated movies and writing novels. ChatGPT,
for example
Linking Words
, could furnish individuals with plot development, character creation, setting description, dialogue and editing, which enable
people
Use synonyms
 to write a compelling novel with less effort and time.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
 could easily find
classes
Use synonyms
 to study
art
Use synonyms
 because the world is increasingly embracing
Use synonyms
art
Correct article usage
the art
show examples
 field, especially for singers or actors.
Hence
Linking Words
, with the assistance of cutting-edge technology, individuals would find it easier to produce
artworks
Fix the agreement mistake
artwork
show examples
 and take part in
art
Use synonyms
classes
Use synonyms
.
Nevertheless
Linking Words
, it is firmly believed that only naturally gifted artists are able to generate highly valuable true
art
Use synonyms
. Indeed, the essence of
art
Use synonyms
 is intangible and abstract, so it might not be passed down fully from one person to another. Without a combination of
skills
Use synonyms
 and theory, individuals are less likely to create true
art
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, a trained actor could perform well on stage, yet they might imbue a character with more spirit than their counterparts who rely solely on their acting
skills
Use synonyms
.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, only unique works of
art
Use synonyms
, enduring throughout history, are produced by renowned innate talents
such
Linking Words
 as
Mona
Correct article usage
the Mona
show examples
 Lisa created by Leonardo De Vinci.
Therefore
Linking Words
,
that is
Linking Words
 why artists are scattered all over the world,
hence
Linking Words
 merely a few of them can be truly called geniuses. In conclusion,
while
Linking Words
 modern society encourages
people
Use synonyms
 to generate artworks by providing them with AI and opportunities to learn
art
Use synonyms
skills
Use synonyms
, it is widely believed that inherited artists are more likely to produce true
art
Use synonyms
, often referred to as
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
masterpiece
Fix the agreement mistake
masterpieces
show examples
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
While your essay does address both views, ensure that each paragraph fully develops and supports the points you are making. Expanding on your examples and explanations can provide more depth.
coherence cohesion
Your writing is clear and easy to follow, but try to make sure that each paragraph logically transitions to the next. Though the flow is generally good, refining transitions can enhance the overall coherence.
coherence cohesion
You have successfully structured your essay with a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in presenting your argument effectively.
task achievement
Your essay includes relevant and specific examples, which effectively support your points.
task achievement
You address both views thoroughly and offer a balanced discussion, which is vital for a high score in task achievement.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: