The graph below shows the consumption of meat in Spain between 2001 and 2011
The line graph shows the six different meat consumption – chicken, beef, duck,
veaf
, pork, and goat - in Spain from 2001 to 2011. The vertical figures represent Correct your spelling
beef
veal
leaf
grams
per person per week.
One notable thing is that chicken consumption skyrocketed and remained a
high from 2003. Change the article
apply
This
number rose from about 450 grams
in 2005 to almost 900 grams
in 2011, which almost doubled over the course of this
time period
. This
was followed by pork despite the stagnation from 2007.
Beef was the most purchased among six meat at the beginning of the time period
, but it started to decline sharpely
from 700 Correct your spelling
sharply
grams
to under 500 grams
. Similarly
, duck
experienced a decline steadily. Fix the agreement mistake
ducks
Finally
, veaf and goat were the lowest preferred meat in the country and none of them even exceed
300 Wrong verb form
exceeded
grams
throughout the whole period
. Those are
fluctuated around 100 Unnecessary verb
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grams
and 200 grams
.
Overall
, this
graph clearly shows that chicken consumption continuously increased from 2001 and 2011, while
other meats experienced increases and decreases over the time period
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