The line graph illustrates the percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and older in three different nations (USA, Sweden and Japan) between 1940 and its prediction in 2040.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and older in three different nations (USA, Sweden and Japan) between 1940 and its prediction in 2040.
The present
line
chart compares data about the percentage of citizens aged 65 and older in 3 various countries namely, Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to its prediction in 2040.
Overall
, in
this
graph the USA exchanged its position with Japan;
thereafter
, the countries' proportion increased and
this
trend will follow in future.
According to
the diagram, in 1940, the first country which had a large number of elderly people was the USA 8%;
then
the
line
climbed to 15% in 1980 after that decreased to 14% from 2000 to 2020. Later the trend will grow and touch the third level in 2040. Sweden which was second in the start had 2.5%;
furthermore
,
this
line
had moderately risen to 20% in 2000;
however
, the number declined in 2020, to 18%, yet scientists think the older society will rise to 25% in 2040. The Japan
line
shows at the beginning of 1940, the figure was 5%;
then
reduced to 3% from 1960 to 1990;
nevertheless
, the
firstly
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chart fell slightly to 2020, and next to the trend will be an enormous jump to 27% in 2040, and catch on the first level.
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