Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The morality of the

zoo

has been criticized by the critics for a long period of time leading to the controversial issue debating on the topic of whether the

zoo

is considered inhumane and pointless or not. Some may agree

while

some opponents may disagree.

However

, after a thorough consideration, though there are some benefits of the

zoo

, the drawbacks of the

zoo

should not be put down by any chance.

One

of the obvious benefits of the

zoo

is its

impacts

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impact

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on

animals

, from

preservation

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the preservation

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of endangered

species

to the increase in the

numbers

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number

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of

the

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animals

in the world.

Zoos

tackle the problems of the drastic incline of animal

species

by providing a home for animal

species

that lose their natural habitat, meaning the

animals

could have a safe place to continue their

species

.

Panda

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is

one

of the endangered

species

that is

kept in the

zoo

for the preservation of its

species

and

also

to do artificial fertilization in order to increase the panda’s population.

Nonetheless

, there are several disadvantages of the

zoo

that should be taken into account. It is undeniable that

zoos

are often viewed as the big cage for the

animals

which restricts the

animals

in a small captivity, and demolishes the natural instinct of the

animals

. The first negative aspect of the

zoo

is that it kept the

animals

in

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small place compared to their natural habitat. To demonstrate, most

zoos

provide a room for each

species

of

animals

which could make some

animals

feel stressed and lead to aggressive behavior.

For instance

, the tigers living in the

zoo

are more likely to hurt the zookeepers from their irritation.

Furthermore

, the

zoos

provided

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food for the

animals

,

ready to eat

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meat, which is

one

of the factors

that

is

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harmful to the

animals

with predator instinct

on finding

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its

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their

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prey. It could be clearly seen from several cases that the

animals

such

as lions that were released to the wild could not find their food when living by themselves.

Consequently

, the

zoo

could be considered as a place that sabotages the

animals

by relocating them to a small area and ruining the animal’s

instinct

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instincts

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. In conclusion,

while

it is true to say that the

zoo

proffer several beneficial impacts to

animals

, in

fact

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i

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personally

believed

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that the

zoo

is

one

of the cruel places for

animals

which could deteriorate the wildlife to several

extent

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.