The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The provided table illustrates information about foreign applicants from India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia at three tertiary institutions.
Overall
, what stands out from the gathered data is that the first three countries sent more students
abroad, indicating the University of Riverview
is the most popular destination.
Around 7500 Indian students
preferred to study at the University of Riverview
, while
Smithtown and Earlwood Universities attracted 6000 and 5000 respectively. While
4000 Nepalian folks applied to Smithtown, Vietnamese accounted for only half. Nevertheless
, their intentions were predominantly the University of Riverview
, having 7500 undergraduates from both countries. Furthermore
, Earwood accumulated 4000 and 3000 applicants from Nepal and Vietnam.
On the other hand
, Indonesian students
' higher education locations are fairly distributed among three options, with numbers around 1000 students
. Conversely
, approximately 1000 Colombians selected the Riverview
, whereas
the other two destinations represented only 1000 in total.Submitted by gainutdin87 on
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