People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter, to bring your attention to a problem with, the internet connection which your company provides. The problem refers to a whole building on the 5th Avenue. For a couple of days, I and my neighbours had a problem with the network, especially in the morning.
Additionally
, some of us can not establish a connection all day.
Furthermore
, a lot of people in the building work remotely including me, which is very problematic, because we can not do our job properly, and have to use a mobile network which is
additionally
very expensive. I would appreciate it if you could send someone to help us. As I mentioned before for many of us a fast and stable internet connection is crucial for work, so we expect your help as soon as possible. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any
further
information. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, George
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Consider including more specific details about the issue, such as the duration of the interruption each day.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread for minor punctuation errors, such as unnecessary commas.
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Clear and respectful tone which is suitable for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
Well-organized structure with distinct paragraphs for each point.
greeting and closing
Effective use of a closing statement and a strong, polite sign-off.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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