The charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests.

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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of males and females arrested from 1989 to 1994,

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the bar graph shows the causative factors for the most recent arrests for both sexes in percentages in the same time period.

Overall

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, more

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were arrested when compared to

women

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Additionally

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, the most popular reason for arrests was public drinking

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, the least common reason was no answer. With regard to

men

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, the pie chart reveals that 32% of the

men

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were arrested in these five years. Public drinking was the most frequent illegal activity committed by them at just over 10%.

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figure is closely followed by drunk driving at 5% less than the former. The percentages of other reasons (breach of order, assault, theft and other reasons) were between 15 and 20%. No answer was the least committed crime at below 5%. Moving ahead, from the pie chart it is clearly evident that 9% of the

women

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were arrested between 1989 and 1994. Similar to

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, about 38% of the

women

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were arrested for public drinking making

this

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the most popular misdemeanor.

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, just below 15% of the

women

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were taken in because of drunk driving.Interestingly, the same percentage of

women

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(approximately 17%) were arrested for assault and other reasons.

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, about 13% of the

women

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were arrested for breach of order and theft. No answer was 4% more common in

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when compared to

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

238 words

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