The chart below shows the number of houses sold in 8 cities in the world for more than 5 Million US dollars in 2009 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of houses sold in 8 cities in the world for more than 5 Million US dollars in 2009 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph above illustrates the
number
of
houses
sold in 8 cities globally costing more than 5 million US dollars between 2009 to 2014. In 2009, Dubai recorded the lowest among the rest as only 12
houses
were sold,
on the other hand
, London was the highest recording 523
houses
sold following Hong Kong and New York as they sold 388 and 476
houses
respectively.
However
, Dubai and the
number
of
houses
costing more than 5 million USD increased in 2014, reaching 46
houses
although
it remains the lowest amongst the other cities alongside Singapore, where the
houses
dropped from 107 in 2009 to 74 in 2014 ranking the lowest after Dubai .
Also
, London's
number
of
houses
dramatically increased in 2014, remaining the highest city with 1638
houses
sold.
whereas
New York and Hongkong remained the second and third highest in terms of
number
of
houses
sold with over 5 million value, scoring 796 and 596 respectively.
Overall
, the cities seem to have a steady increase in the
number
of
houses
sold except for Singapore where it showed a drop in 2014, compared to 2009.
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