The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
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gives information about the amount of the values of
exports
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of kiwi fruit from New
Zeeland
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Zealand
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to
Japan
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,
China
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,
Mexico
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,
Russia
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and Saudi Arabia
in
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over a 3-year period from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
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,
Japan
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was New
Zeeland’s
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Zealand’s
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largest
export
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market during the period shown. It is
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noticeable that
exports
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to
Japan
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,
China
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,
Mexico
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and
Russia
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increased,
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exports
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and exports
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to Saudi Arabia saw an
overall
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declined
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. The about given graph
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the
values
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of
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export
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exports
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to
Japan
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rose from $271
million
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in 2010 to $325,3
million
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in 2012.
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, kiwi
export
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revenues that New
Zeeland
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Zealand
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earned from Saudi Arabia
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gradually from $29
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in 2010 to only $82,000 in 2012. The trend for
China
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,
Mexico
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and
Russia
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noticeably
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different. The values of
exports
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to
China
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,
Mexico
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and
Russia
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were
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rose,
at
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$74,9
million
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, $1,2
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and $ 0,968
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,
repectively
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respectively
in 2010. Two years
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,
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export
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exports
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earned from these markets
significant
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increased to $94
million
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, $ 3,3
million
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and $2,4
million
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,
repectively
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respectively
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, japan, china, mexico, russia, export, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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