The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

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The given bar graph represents the total number of foreign student admissions at three universities namely Smithtown

academy

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, academy of Riverview and Earlwood educational institution.

Overall

, it is evident that

students

mainly hail from five different countries, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia. The maximum population enrolled in the formerly mentioned schools come from India and the least number from Colombia. Around 7500 Indian

students

chose to study at the University of Riverview, 5000 from Nepal, 3500 from Vietnam and nearly 1000 from both Indonesia and Colombia.

This

school was one of the most popular choices for international people coming from different regions. The second most preferred choice for Indians was Smithtown College as around 6000

students

applied for enrolment, Earlwood college was slightly less popular than the former. Both universities were equally popular among

students

coming from Nepal and Indonesia, around 4000 and 1000 applications were collected respectively.

Whereas

, Colombians and people from Vietnam liked Earlwood University more than Smithtown University.

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