You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.
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disadvantages
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as life expectancy grows the Correct your spelling
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amount of population increases.as Correct your spelling
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we will need more resources to feed and provide necesserities
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communities
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a lack
man power
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we can get more emotional support because we can share more time with our elderly loved ones.Add a comma
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guidance
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Expand the introduction to clearly outline the main points that will be discussed.
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Provide specific examples and detailed explanations to support your points.
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Pay attention to spelling and grammatical accuracy to improve clarity and readability.
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Ensure a logical progression of ideas with clear transitions between paragraphs.
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The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of increasing life expectancy.
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The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay.
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