The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The employment patterns in the USA are represented by the line graph above. The start date mentioned in
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is 1930 and the end date is 2010. The chart has a linear structure, meaningfully, the dataset is described by multiple lines coloured differently.
Firstly
, the vertical
divided
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into sections by
a
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number of
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labours
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labourers
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,
whereas
the horizontal part illustrates the years from 1930 to 2010.
Secondly
, the information each colour presents
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below the table.
According to
the data, the "farming, fishing and foresting" section is only the one to have
such
a huge curve from the highest point in 1930 to the lowest in 2010,
however
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other segments stay
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the same point or have only a small
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. Looking closely
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the departments, except "farming, fishing and foresting", the essential
increasing
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of the force was in "technical" between 1960 to 2000. To summarize,
due to
this
infographic, the
compareness
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compactness
of each area is fast and comfortable, and
this
is the best solution for the set with the same characteristics.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment patterns
  • industrial sector
  • agricultural sector
  • service sector
  • figures
  • percentages
  • trends
  • decreasing trend
  • increasing trend
  • significant growth
  • considerable decline
  • expansion
  • analyze
  • observations
  • key periods
  • transitions
  • conclusion
  • economy
  • shifted focus
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