The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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illustrates the travel by different transportations in England and the average distance per person a year from 1985 to 2000.

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, it is evident that travel by car was the

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ways over the

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period, there were increased gradually to 366

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and 585

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, respectively. Regarding walking and local

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, traveling by walking

deceased

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slightly from 255

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in 1985 to 237

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in 2000.

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, local

bus

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fell significantly from 429

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in 1985 to 274

miles

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in 2000.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

You live in a room in the college hostel which has severe problems. You would like to move into another room and need your hostel super's permission for that. Write a letter to the hostel super. In your letter, introduce yourself describe the problems explain what type of room you would prefer

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The most important aim of science be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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