The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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illustrates the travel by different transportations in England and the average distance per person a year from 1985 to 2000.

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, it is evident that travel by car was the

popular

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ways over the

fifteen- year

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period, there were increased gradually to 366

miles

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and 585

miles

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, respectively. Regarding walking and local

bus

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, traveling by walking

deceased

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decreased

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slightly from 255

miles

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in 1985 to 237

miles

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in 2000.

In contrast

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, local

bus

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fell significantly from 429

miles

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in 1985 to 274

miles

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in 2000.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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