The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
The
chare
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illustrates the travel by different transportations in England and the average distance per person a year from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that travel by car was the
popular
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way in England from 3199
miles
in 1985 to 4806
miles
in 2000.
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, both
taxi
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taxis
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and
bicycle
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bicycles
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were not a
favorite
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way in England followed by 13
miles
and 51
miles
in 1985, respectively. In terms of
car
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cars
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,
train
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trains
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, and other, travel by car
way
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was
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the most popular mode in both 1985 and 2000, there
were
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rose markedly from 3199
miles
to 4806
miles
. Train and other modes were the second
popular
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ways over the
fifteen- year
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fifteen-year
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period, there were increased gradually to 366
miles
and 585
miles
, respectively. Regarding walking and local
bus
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buses
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, traveling by walking
deceased
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decreased
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slightly from 255
miles
in 1985 to 237
miles
in 2000.
In contrast
, local
bus
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buses
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fell significantly from 429
miles
in 1985 to 274
miles
in 2000.
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