The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The present bar chart compares data about the number of global pupils who are from 5 various countries namely, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia enrolments at 3 different universities.
Overall
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, Indians have a large section of Universities
instead
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of Colombia.
In addition
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, the popular
university
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is the
University
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of Riverview.
According to
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the graph, the first
university
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which has a lot of international students is the
University
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of Riverview;
moreover
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, Indians have the main population in there by 7500;
then
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Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia have nearly 1000 respectively. The second one is Smithtown
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, and
this
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trend for countries is the same as the
University
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of Riverview.
Also
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, the largest number is 6000 from India.
However
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, Earlwood
University
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has the lowest level;
furthermore
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, have the same trend as other institutes from diverse countries. Amazingly, in Nepal and Indonesia, the international pupils at Smithtown
University
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are equal to Earlwood
University
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by roughly 4000 and 1500.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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