The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The present bar chart compares data about the number of global pupils who are from 5 various countries namely, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia enrolments at 3 different universities.
Overall
, Indians have a large section of Universities
instead
of Colombia.
In addition
, the popular
university
is the
University
of Riverview.
According to
the graph, the first
university
which has a lot of international students is the
University
of Riverview;
moreover
, Indians have the main population in there by 7500;
then
Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia have nearly 1000 respectively. The second one is Smithtown
University
, and
this
trend for countries is the same as the
University
of Riverview.
Also
, the largest number is 6000 from India.
However
, Earlwood
University
has the lowest level;
furthermore
, have the same trend as other institutes from diverse countries. Amazingly, in Nepal and Indonesia, the international pupils at Smithtown
University
are equal to Earlwood
University
by roughly 4000 and 1500.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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