The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph indicates the amount of money spent by each household
according to
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the three
income
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ranks.
Overall
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, the tendency of spending is similar among the three
income
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groups for the top-sharing two categories: housing and transportation.
On the other hand
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, there are huge differences in the proportion of money spared in retirement savings, utilities, and food costs at home.
First,
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the cost of living shares the highest in all the groups with just over one-fourth of household
income
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. Public transportation contributes to the second highest expenditure in
households
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with low and middle
income
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with a
rate
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of just under 20 %, which contributes to the third most expense for
households
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with high
income
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with a
rate
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of 15 % slightly less than that of retirement savings.
Next,
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the proportions for money expense on retirement savings have the most varied
according to
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income
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; the minimal is that of
households
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with low
income
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at a
rate
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under 5 % which is less than one-third of that of
households
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with high
income
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.
On the contrary
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, it is highest on food at home in
households
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with low
income
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with a
rate
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of over 10 % which is more than double that in
households
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with high
income
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • income category
  • household spending
  • low-income households
  • mid-income households
  • high-income households
  • spending pattern
  • expenditure
  • trend
  • notably
  • significantly
  • on average
  • predominantly
  • essential expenses
  • disposable income
  • allocate
  • budget
  • vary
  • contrast
  • percentage
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