The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to new Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.
The line graph compares the
amount
of annual visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
spend
in New Zealand from different 5 countries over the period of 18 years between 1996 and 2014.
In general, the country that spends the biggest Wrong verb form
spent
amount
of money was
Australia, Wrong verb form
is
while
China spends the least one.
Firstly
, in 1996 China spent the least amount
of money inNew
Zealand which is nearly 0, Correct your spelling
in New
while
UK and Japan spent as much as each other (nearly 500). However
, by 2002, the gap in spending between these two countries was
definitely changed. Verb problem
had
Expenditure
of Japan increased to 1000 and Correct article usage
The expenditure
expenditure
of Correct article usage
the expenditure
UK
decreased to 100.
Correct article usage
the UK
Moreover
, as we can see from the graph, in 2008 the amount
of money which was spent by Australia, China and Japan reduced rapidly. However
, USA
and UK grew up. In the period between 2008 and Correct article usage
the USA
2014
there Add a comma
2014,
was
fluctuations in the Change the verb form
were
spend
of Replace the word
spending
whole
5 countries.Correct article usage
the whole
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