The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar chart illustrates how much
energy
was produced by wind in four countries (India, Denmark
, Germany and the United States) in four years (1985, 1990, 1995 and 2000). Units are measured in megawatts.
Overall
, the US produced the most wind energy
over the period given except in the final year when Denmark
produced the most. India, Denmark
and Germany witnessed a steady climb over the years in the amount of energy
they generated, whereas
the US showed an initial increase followed by a slight decline.
In terms of the US, energy
production stood at 1200 megawatts in 1985. It peaked in 1990 at just over 1600 before falling by around 100 to 1500 in the final year.
On the other hand
, the energy
generated in Denmark
was just over 200 megawatts in 1985 and then
rose almost eight-fold over the years to peak at just over 1600 in 2000. India also
saw a significant rise in energy
generation, starting at 200 and ending at 1200. Lastly
, Germany saw a much lower growth rate only doubling over the period to reach just over 800.Submitted by Writing8
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, denmark with synonyms.
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