The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
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The bar chart illustrates how much
energy
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was produced by wind in four countries (India,
Denmark
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, Germany and the United States) in four years (1985, 1990, 1995 and 2000). Units are measured in megawatts.
Overall
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, the US produced the most wind
energy
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over the period given except in the final year when
Denmark
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produced the most. India,
Denmark
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and Germany witnessed a steady climb over the years in the amount of
energy
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they generated,
whereas
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the US showed an initial increase followed by a slight decline. In terms of the US,
energy
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production stood at 1200 megawatts in 1985. It peaked in 1990 at just over 1600 before falling by around 100 to 1500 in the final year.
On the other hand
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, the
energy
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generated in
Denmark
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was just over 200 megawatts in 1985 and
then
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rose almost eight-fold over the years to peak at just over 1600 in 2000. India
also
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saw a significant rise in
energy
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generation, starting at 200 and ending at 1200.
Lastly
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, Germany saw a much lower growth rate only doubling over the period to reach just over 800.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, denmark with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wind energy generation
  • megawatts (MW)
  • renewable energy
  • energy production
  • growth trend
  • decline
  • technological advancements
  • government policies
  • historical data
  • relative contribution
  • energy mix
  • comparison
  • renewable resources
  • sustainability
  • capacity
  • installations
  • annual production
  • percent increase/decrease
  • between 1985 and 2000
  • notable changes
  • country-specific trends
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