The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts compare four retail sectors in Canada in terms of the proportion of their Internet
sales
over a 5-year timescale from 2005 to 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of online sales
from Food & Beverage and Video Games witnessed an upward trend while
that of Home Furnishings and Electronics & Appliance
saw a reverse pattern during the surveyed period. Electronic & Fix the agreement mistake
Appliances
Appliance
was by far the most popular retail sector.
In 2005, the proportion of Electronic & Appliance
reached the highest point, accounting for 35% which was in the region of higher 10% than Home Furnishings. Food & Beverage followed behind at 22%. This
figure for Video Games, however
, was the lowest, at just 18%.
From 2005 to 2010, while
the percentage of the sales
from Food & Beverage and Video Games on the Internet registered an increase to 32% and 23%, respectively, there was a decrease of 10% in that of Electronic & Appliance
. Furthermore
, this
country saw a significant decline in online sales
from Home Furnishings to just 15% in the final year.Submitted by vietnam.rosy.nguyen on
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