The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.

The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
The line graph provided demonstrates how many
students
from Iran, Turkey and Greece were admitted to Sheffield
University
from 2005 to 2009.
Overall
, Greece and the other two countries diverged evidently in student
enrollment
.
Greek
students
enrolled at a slower pace,
while
more and more Turkish and Iranian
students
entered the
university
. In 2005, Sheffield
University
enrolled
much
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more
Greek
students
than those from any other country listed, from 180 to less than 40.
However
,
Greek
freshmen rapidly diminished to approximately 70 in 2007, by which Greece was overtaken by Iran and Turkey in
enrollment
. Afterwards,
Greek
student
enrollment
continued to slide, to about 30 in 2009. The
enrollment
of Iranian
students
grew in parallel with that of Turkish
students
by 2008, when the former began to soar. In 2009, Iran became the largest source country as 160 Sheffield
University
freshmen were Iranian, a striking rise from less than 40 in 2005. The number of Turkish
students
who enrolled in the
university
also
saw a considerable increase, from around 20 in 2005 to over 120 in 2009.
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