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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
waste
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production
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 by A,
B
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 and
C
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 companies between the years 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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,
Waste
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production
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 increased over the years in
C
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company
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,
while
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 A and
B
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 companies showed a reduction in
waste
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 material by the
year
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 2015. In the
year
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 2000 the highest
waste
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production
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 was marked in A
company
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 which is around 12
tons
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 and by the
year
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 2015, it had significantly reduced to end up in second position with a little less than 9
tons
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 of
production
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.
B
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company
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 had an elevation of
production
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 in the
year
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 2005 and had a dramatic decrease of the
waste
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 material in 2015, which decreased nearly by 6
tons
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.
B
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company
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 achieved the least
waste
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production
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 by the
year
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 2015.
C
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company
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 showed a gradual increase in
waste
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production
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 from 2000 to 2015, starting up from a bit more than 3
tons
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 to reaching more than 9
tons
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 and it marked the highest amount of
waste
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 produced by a
company
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. In 2010 the amount of
waste
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production
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 of
B
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 and
C
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company
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 was equal to nearly 7
tons
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, b, c, company, year, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • peak
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • intersect
  • consistent
  • tonnes
  • measurement
  • compare
  • contrast
  • period
  • analytical
  • overview
  • summarize
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