The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
A glance at the flow chart provided highlights the procedure of how
plastic
bottles
been
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fully recycled.
Overall
, there are several stages in the diagram. At the beginning, it commences with throwing away
plastic
bottles and
at the end
, products
such
as clothes or bottles are produced.
According to
the information shown in the diagram, in the first stage, the
plastic
wastes are collected by trashcans, which will be collected by
trashtrucks
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trash trucks
and
be
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sent to
recycling
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center
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for sorting in
next
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the next
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step. As long as the
plastic
products
be
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are
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sorted, they will be compressed into blocks and
be
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crushed by two giant gears, which are going to cut the
plastic
boxes into mesh in a pool to clean all the meshes up; meanwhile, the mesh is formed into pellets and delivered to a giant oven for gotten heated up to form raw material in the upcoming phrase.
Finally
, the factory now can use
the
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fully recycled material to produce anything they want.
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