The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The provided map illustrates a business region in
thecenter
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the centre
of Norton,and how
this
place is going to be extended from the site. A glance at the map reveals that the whole area is going to experience a lot of new construction and urbanization
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providing many houses in the near future in Norton.
Firstly
,there are three factories which have surrounded a
square
in the north,northwest and southwest of the roundabout and they are working now in an industrial region near the river.
However
,the factories are going to be demolished and replaced by
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area,a street and a shopping mall.
In addition
,there is not any Medical Centre beside the
square
,but the government have
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to introduce a Medical Centre in the southeast of the
square
in the future. Another striking change will be the erection of
the
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new playground near the main road between two housing
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in the future.
Moreover
,there are several various factories next to the street in the east of the roundabout which they will have turned into residences until some years later.Another notable development will be the transformation of the one factory into a school in the east of the town.
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Furthermore
,the government is going to build a new street and a bridge in the north of the
square
in order to allow the cars to pass through the river.
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