The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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issues for inhabitants in seven cities in Use synonyms
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(Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Manchester, Glasgow, and London) in Correct article usage
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, Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff and Manchester had the Linking Words
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highest
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On the other hand
, Glasgow and London had the same problem in Linking Words
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and training with 52%.
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, Newcastle had a proportion Linking Words
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, Belfast had 58% in Linking Words
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and 52% with 8% in Use synonyms
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Birmingham had 54% in Linking Words
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services
and 52% in Educational and training with 9% in Use synonyms
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, Therefor, Cardiff had 58% in Use synonyms
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51% in Educational and training with 12% in Linking Words
Air
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, Manchester had 51% in Linking Words
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services
with 45% in Educational and training and 11% in Use synonyms
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Finally
, Glasgow and London had the same rate in Educational and training with 53% in Linking Words
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