There are two line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the tuatal time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
The upper line graph depicts the percentage of
housholds
owning three electrical appliances-washing Correct your spelling
households
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vaccum
Correct your spelling
vacuum
cleaner
- from 1920 to 2019 in a certain country, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
while
the lower chart demonstrates the number of weekly hours
of household chores during the same period.
Overall
, there was a dramatic increase in the ownership of all three electrical devices, where refrigerators and vaccum
cleaners were Correct your spelling
vacuum
owened
by every household by the end of the given period. Correct your spelling
owned
This
has been mirrored on
the number of Change preposition
in
hours
of housework per week which had
dramatically declined throughout the Wrong verb form
has
last
six decades.
At the beginning of the time, in 1920, almost all houses had no refrigerator, however
, 30% and 40% of them owned a vaccum
and a washing machine, respectively. Over the next forty years, the fridge's ownership significantly jumped to 90 Correct your spelling
vacuum
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
the other two cleaning appliances rose to the same level of 70%. From 1960 onwards, the percentage of washing machine owners slightly fluctuated before slowly going up to approximately 75%, while
households
percentage having refrigerators and Change noun form
households'
household's
vaccum
cleaners continued to rocket to 100% in 2000 and leveled off till 2019.
Correct your spelling
vacuum
This
substantial rise in appliances' ownership was reflected on
the total Change preposition
in
hours
spent on housework weekly as they were
declined from 50 Unnecessary verb
apply
hours
to 20 hours
of chores in 1960. This
was followed by a slight decrease to 10 hours
throughout the next six decades.Submitted by Lilly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vaccum, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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