The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.
The line graph illustrates the export proportion of Australia with four different nations.
In general, the rates of two countries including
Japan
, and the US tended to decrease, Use synonyms
while
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China
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India
's proportions witnessed an increase over time.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990, Use synonyms
Japan
's was at 26%, more than the US's rate by 10%. Meanwhile, the two percentages of Use synonyms
China
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India
were under 5%. After 5 years, both figures for Use synonyms
Japan
and the US sharply decreased to 20% and 9%, respectively. In 2000, three Use synonyms
China
's, the US's and Use synonyms
India
's proportions went up, among that the percentage of Use synonyms
Japan
had a slight drop.
In 2005, the rate of Use synonyms
China
rocketed before reaching 30% in 2012. Use synonyms
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, the figure for Linking Words
India
rose to 7% in 2010 Use synonyms
then
slightly falling. Linking Words
By contrast
, Linking Words
Japan
's and Use synonyms
India
's figures continued to go down to 17% and 6%, respectively in 2012.Use synonyms
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