The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.
The line graph illustrates the export proportion of Australia with four different nations. In general, the rates of two countries including
Japan
, and the US tended to decrease,
while
China
's and
India
's proportions witnessed an increase over time. Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990,
Japan
's was at 26%, more than the US's rate by 10%. Meanwhile, the two percentages of
China
and
India
were under 5%. After 5 years, both figures for
Japan
and the US sharply decreased to 20% and 9%, respectively. In 2000, three
China
's, the US's and
India
's proportions went up, among that the percentage of
Japan
had a slight drop. In 2005, the rate of
China
rocketed before reaching 30% in 2012.
Besides
, the figure for
India
rose to 7% in 2010
then
slightly falling.
By contrast
,
Japan
's and
India
's figures continued to go down to 17% and 6%, respectively in 2012.
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