The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table illustrates the various sources of the expenditures of police from 2017 and 2018 in Britain.
Additionally
, the pie chart showed that
how much money was spent in those years.
Wrong verb form
shows
Overall
, It is clear that
the expense to the National Government showed the most significant change compared to the other two options. Moreover
, in the pie chart, spending on buildings and transports
remained unchanged in the same time frame.
When it comes to budget, the local taxes increased to 11.2 Fix the agreement mistake
transport
miliion
between 2017 and 2018. Correct your spelling
million
In contrast
, the budget of the National Government and the other sources went up by 0.3m and 0.5m respectively.
Looking at the pie chart in more detail, the percentage of wages accounted for 75% in 2017, but the percentage is
decreased by 6% in the following years . Unnecessary verb
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Although
they used money for technology just 8% in 2017, they increased to 14% in 2018. The percentages of infrastructures such
as buildings and transport remained stable(17%), showing that no distinctions in the
both years.Remove the article
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