The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
pie chart depicts all of these three,profit distribution all over the world,
coffee
production
and
coffee
consumption. It is clear from the graph that the figures are not stable.
According to
what is shown, consumption is divided into four categories. The first one and the highest in Europe, which comes directly after America, the rest of the world and
then
with four per
cent
less Japan. In detail,
production
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contains four countries.
With the
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lowest proportion is Vietnam with 16 per
cent
and
then
with two per
cent
more comes Japan.
Then
with 22 per
cent
Indonesia
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in Indonesia
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, the highest proportion in South Africa. Moving on, profit distribution around the world. Nearly has the same percentage as
production
with some differences.
Firstly
, the highest proportion of delivery comes after retailers
then
eporters and the lowest producers.
To sum up
, we could say that
coffee
production
has a close percentage , unlike the rest.
Coffee
consumption has two close proportions Europe and America. In
profit
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profit,
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distribution delivery has more than half.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, production, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • coffee production
  • coffee consumption
  • profit distribution
  • highest
  • lowest
  • concentrated
  • exporting countries
  • producer
  • consumer
  • significant difference
  • largest
  • territories
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