The provided charts illustrate the participation of countrywide athletes in the Summer and Winter Olympic Games from 1988 to 2004.

The provided charts illustrate the participation of countrywide athletes in the Summer and Winter Olympic Games from 1988 to 2004.
The provided charts illustrate the participation of countrywide athletes in the Summer and Winter Olympic Games from 1988 to 2004. In general, it is evident that the number of Summer Olympics participants was the greatest by the end of the period,
while
that of Winter Olympians experienced a dramatic decline despite the initial growth.
According to
the line graph, there were 6
million
participants who engaged in the 1988 Winter Olympics and
this
figure reached a peak of 8
million
in 1992 before plummeting by 5
million
8 years later.
Then
, it witnessed a gradual fall to only 2
million
in 2004. As regards the pie chart, the 2004 Olympics recorded the highest participation, with 9
million
athletes. Meanwhile, the years 2000 and 1988 had the second-highest (7
million
) and third-highest (5
million
) attendance levels, respectively.
In contrast
, the years 1996 and 1992 saw significantly fewer competitors in 1996 and 1992, with the former figure being 3
million
compared to only 2
million
of the latter.
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