More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

A school of thought holds the perception that individuals are now migrating to urban

areas

in search

for

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greener pastures. The essay will elaborate

both

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the causes and effects that

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society might encounter in years to come.

On the other hand

, scarcity of

food

nowadays has become a major challenge for the public

due to

farmers

migrating to urban

areas

for quality livelihood. The major challenge is associated with

lack

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a lack

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of

infrastructures

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infrastructure

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and social amenities in

the

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rural

areas

.

For instance

quality education and health for their family. There are numerous solutions to

this

issue and one is, officials constructing adequate infrastructures and ensuring the

farmers

are properly taken care

off

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. Another point is

poor

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the poor

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accessibility of roads and transport to convey the produce to the city.

Farmers

encounter challenges many times in terms of transporting

food

items which sometimes decay in the process

as a result

of delays in transportation, which sometimes makes them work in vain. Another point is

farmers

being cheated by traders in terms of purchasing the produce,

food

stuffs

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are been bought cheaper from the workers and sold at

a reasonable prices

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in the markets to gain more profit than the workers themselves,

therefore

this

act

deter

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them from cultivating again and migrating to the urban

areas

for greener pasture. There should be fixed prices for

food

commodities, which should be guided by strict

law

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laws

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from the officials.

Farmers

are not well catered for by

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society, social security

are

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not paid which makes them not entitled to

pension

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a pension

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scheme

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schemes

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,

therefore

they will migrate and look for

white coloured

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jobs for

pension

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pensions

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to be paid to secure their future.

To conclude

, factors influencing

farmers

to migrate to the urban

areas

are poor infrastructures and social amenities, officials not paying social security, traders purchasing at cheaper prices and poor accessibility to roads. The possible solutions are

being

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elaborated

in

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the essay above.