The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summer use the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how many people living in city areas in the
world
and five parts of the world
in 1950, 2007, and 2030.
In 1950, the world
's city population was 29%, which considerably increased to 49% in 2007 and will continue up to 60% until 2030. However
, the people who lived in Africa and Asia in 1950 were similar, with only 15% and 17%, respectively, which is almost twice lower
Correct word choice
as low
than
that in the Change preposition
as
world
. After that, the figure for these two areas rocketed by 22% and 24%, respectively, and be
predicted to Correct subject-verb agreement
is
more
than 50% in 2030.
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By contrast
, the data for the proportion of Europe, Latin America
, and North America
were all higher than that in the world
. The percentage of North American took the leading position since 1950 to 2030. As for Latin America
, the proportion experienced a high rate before 2007, with a 34% rise taking the second position.
Overall
, the proportion of people living in urban areas in Africa and Asia is lower than the world
average, Whereas
that of Europe, Latin America
, and North America
is much higher than average.Submitted by yihualuo525 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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