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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

Mr.Ramandeep, Hope you are doing well.I am writing
this
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 letter regarding request about late Rent of April month. I am writing
this
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 letter. I
am work
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 with
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a courioo
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courioo
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courier
company
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 for
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last
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Year
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.My
company
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 have good
busniess
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business
 but
last
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one
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apply
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Year
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company
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the company
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 in
loss
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 and all
worker
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workers
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wait
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 for pay
3
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to 4
Month
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 and
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company
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the company
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 owner pay
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the salery
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salery
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salary
sales
trunwise
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unwise
 every worker.My
trurn
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turn
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 week. I am a family
men
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.I have
responsibilty
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responsibility
of
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 my family. please understand my conditions. I am pay reny in May 15. your
sincerly
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sincerely
, Tilak Raj.

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coherence cohesion
Organize your letter properly: Start with an introduction, followed by clearly stating the issue, explaining the reason, and concluding with a proposed solution.
task achievement
Correct minor grammatical and spelling errors to improve clarity and tone.
task achievement
You addressed the issue directly, which is important for clarity.
suitable writing tone
Your polite tone and expression of hope for the landlord's understanding create a respectful and appropriate atmosphere.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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