The line graph shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.
The line graph displays
production
levels of the main fossil fuels in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000.
Correct article usage
the production
Overall
, all figures increased except coal. There was only natural gas, which rose stable. The other two fluctuated, with the range approximately
35 and under 142.
Petroleum oil started Change preposition
of approximately
with
being a leader, grew up stable until 1987 and dramatically fell above 100 in 1989. Change preposition
apply
After
this
consistently rose until the end and was the leader in the end.
Under 40, natural gas started with the lowest production level and grew up
be stable to 1990. Change preposition
to
However
, it increased significantly from 1991 and finished just below 100, which gave him second place in the end. Finally
, coal started at the same level as petroleum. But he
fell dramatically in 1983 until under 40 and started Correct pronoun usage
it
fluctuated
until 1985. Wrong verb form
fluctuating
Finally
, from 1985 this
index consistently dropped to above 30 and was the loser in 2000.Submitted by dnm.best on
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