The line graph shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.

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levels of the main fossil fuels in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000.

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, all figures increased except coal. There was only natural gas, which rose stable. The other two fluctuated, with the range

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35 and under 142. Petroleum oil started

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being a leader, grew up stable until 1987 and dramatically fell above 100 in 1989.

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consistently rose until the end and was the leader in the end. Under 40, natural gas started with the lowest production level and grew

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be stable to 1990.

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, it increased significantly from 1991 and finished just below 100, which gave him second place in the end.

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, coal started at the same level as petroleum. But

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fell dramatically in 1983 until under 40 and started

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until 1985.

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, from 1985

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index consistently dropped to above 30 and was the loser in 2000.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

153 words

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The line graph shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.

Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read any entertainment books because they think it is wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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