The line graph shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.

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levels of the main fossil fuels in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000.

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, all figures increased except coal. There was only natural gas, which rose stable. The other two fluctuated, with the range

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35 and under 142. Petroleum oil started

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being a leader, grew up stable until 1987 and dramatically fell above 100 in 1989.

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this

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consistently rose until the end and was the leader in the end. Under 40, natural gas started with the lowest production level and grew

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be stable to 1990.

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, it increased significantly from 1991 and finished just below 100, which gave him second place in the end.

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, coal started at the same level as petroleum. But

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fell dramatically in 1983 until under 40 and started

fluctuated

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until 1985.

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, from 1985

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index consistently dropped to above 30 and was the loser in 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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