The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below demonstrates the steps and equipment involved in the production of how ethanol is made.
Overall
, there are 4 main stages in the whole production stages, namely Harvesting, Pre-Processing, Processing as well as
Microbes added.
Based on the information given, plants and trees need to absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide in order to gain energy. After they mature, it is time to harvest them. Next,
after farmers collect these plants, they are put into a machine to run pre-processing so that cellulose can be extracted. The next stage is the processing stage. During this
stage, the chemical element which is called Sugars is refined.
After that, some microbes are added, which form ethanol. The usage of ethanol can be implemented in many areas, including shipments, cars and aeroplanes. As a result
, the carbon dioxide produced from transportation is released into the atmosphere and continues to produce energy and raw materials for plants.Submitted by bubblehead1213 on
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