The tourist industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days, the

tourism

industry has been one of the booming sectors around the world for over fifty years. Even though, some say that

tourism

does not provide many more privileges to

nations

when travellers

visit

. I strongly disagree with

this

statement for the following reasons.

To begin

with,

tourism

brings enormous benefits to

nations

constantly.

This

means

,

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tourists

can utilize all the facilities by paying money where they go to

visit

while

they should need accommodations, food, travel vehicles, and travel guides.

For example

, travellers pay taxes when they buy any

stuffs

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, and

as a result

, the

country

's economy will rise tremendously because of

tourists

. Needless to say,

tourists

not only

visit

to

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other

nations

in certain periods but

also

the whole year they

visit

where their loved places

, so

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tourism

always brings

earning

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earnings

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to the

nations

constantly.

Furthermore

,

tourism

provides a plethora of employment opportunities to the population where sightseers

visit

the territories.

This

is, local people sell their

handcraft

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items, vegetables, rare

country

fruits and hand-made dresses to foreigners in order

to

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the local

inhabitant's

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earnings

are

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stable.

For instance

, many people's regular income from

tourists

and they have small shops in that places, earn from

tourism

.

Hence

,

tourism

certainly, brings enormous amounts of

earnings

to the

country

where visitors come. In conclusion,

tourism

plays a crucial role in the nation's economy. It brings more

earnings

to the

country

constantly because the local

residence's

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income and

job

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jobs

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are stable

along

with

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tourists

pay more taxes when they purchase things.

Therefore

, I completely disagree with

this

statement because

tourism

creates a lot of

earnings

and income constantly

to

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the

nations

where traveller visits places.