The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.

The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.
The provided diagram illustrates two different cutting tools that are produced by tiny pieces of stone from various times in human history between the early period and the later period.
Overall
,
Tool
A which is from the early year period was smaller than
Tool
B
which is from the later year,
while
Tool
B
has a symmetrical shape and its size is bigger than
Tool
A on both the front and back views. On the side
view
the stones diagram shows
Tool
B
's structure was sharper than
Tool
A's. The picture of
Tool
A depicts an unsymmetrical form in the front
view
and its size is about 7 centimetres. On the back
view
, the illustration shows an uneven texture at the border of the
tool
and on the side
view
of
Tool
A
that
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gathered
by
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a small piece of rock into a
tool
. For
Tool
B
, the front
view
drawing illustrates a symmetrical water drop shape and its length of approximately 10 centimetres.
The
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back of the
tool
, are some little rocks that combine with the
tool
and
also
its form has a smoother border than
Tool
A which makes
Tool
B
look completely in perfect condition.
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