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The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.

The diagrams below show two cutting tools made from stone. They are from an early period and a later period of human history. The tools were made by breaking off small pieces of stone.
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The provided diagram illustrates two different cutting tools that are produced by tiny pieces of stone from various times in human history between the early period and the later period.
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Tool
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 A which is from the early year period was smaller than
Tool
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B
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 which is from the later year,
while
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Tool
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B
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 has a symmetrical shape and its size is bigger than
Tool
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 A on both the front and back views. On the side
view
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 the stones diagram shows
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B
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's structure was sharper than
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 A's. The picture of
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 A depicts an unsymmetrical form in the front
view
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 and its size is about 7 centimetres. On the back
view
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, the illustration shows an uneven texture at the border of the
tool
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 and on the side
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 of
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 A
that
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gathered
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a small piece of rock into a
tool
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. For
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B
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, the front
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 drawing illustrates a symmetrical water drop shape and its length of approximately 10 centimetres.
The
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 back of the
tool
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, are some little rocks that combine with the
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 its form has a smoother border than
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 A which makes
Tool
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B
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 look completely in perfect condition.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tool, b, view with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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