Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Children

are of utmost importance in every nation.

However

, some believe that school teachers should not give tasks to juveniles to do at

home

while

others say that

homework

is a vital part of

children

's education.

This

essay will discuss both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

no

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homework

policy is good for teens because they should need

break

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and relaxation from their education when return

home

from

schools

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.

This

is,

children

must

to

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learn some other activities in the evening time like art, music and yoga; these activities help to develop their interests

besides

academics.

For example

, Vietnam schools follow

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homework

policy because

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numerous teenagers have been affected by the obesity issue. Needless to say, when teachers do not give

homework

to students

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they have more time to explore their interests apart from

studies

.

On the other hand

, school tasks to do

children

at

home

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a significant aspect to scholars because it helps to

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without any pressures when they write exams.

This

is, every day subjects should study and memorise by

child

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at their

home

in order to

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constantly.

For instance

, many researchers say that

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engaging

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studies

can assist

to get

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good

score

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during exams, not only

studies

schools but

also

learns

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at

homes

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.

Hence

,

homework

should be given by teachers. In conclusion,

although

homework

should not be given by tutors because it affects

children

's extra-curricular activities in the evening time, doing

homework

at

home

helps to

being

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engaged

studies

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in studies

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for kids.

Therefore

, in my opinion,

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, no

homework

policy provides numerous benefits to kids .