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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house / flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #house #reason #apologise #action
Dear Tom, how are you ? I hope you are fine
?
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 I’m writing
this
 letter because I read your letter about the noise from my
house
.
Firstly
, the noise coming from my
house
 is because I want to change the decor of my
house
. Some
worker
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 comes
in
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to
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 my
house
for realising
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to realise
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this
changement
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change
.
Then
, they change the place of
affaires
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affairs
 in different
bedroom
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 and living
room
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rooms
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. The time of
this
work
 is about one week. I apologize
about
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this
 derangement for you. I know you want to relax after a day of
work
. After reading your letter, I
decide
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 to limit the hours of
works
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work
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 in my
house
.
Is
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 no
work
 after 18
h
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hours
 in the evening.
In
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weekend
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the weekend
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, I
work
 only in my
house
 without
other worker
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another worker
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. the
changement
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change
 of
place
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the place
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 of the bedrooms will
be realise
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be realised
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 in the next week. I will devise the total
work
 in 2 weeks.
i
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 hope my dear, you
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accept
accepted
accepte
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accept
 my
apologie
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apologise
apologies
 best regards
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure can be improved by organizing the content into clear, distinct paragraphs for each point: the explanation, the apology, and the actions you will take.
coherence cohesion
Ensure you address the recipient properly: capitalize the first word in sentences and use correct punctuation (e.g., question marks are not needed after a greeting).
task achievement
Check for grammatical errors and improve sentence structure for clarity. For instance, 'Some worker comes in my house for realising this changement' can be improved to 'Some workers have been coming to my house to carry out this renovation work.'
task achievement
The letter fully addresses the prompt by explaining the reason for the noise, apologizing, and describing the actions you will take to mitigate it.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable and polite, which shows respect for your neighbors' concerns.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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