The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the chars show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both
the table and the charts provide data on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in Britain. The table illustrates sources
of finances while
the chart shows how it was divided.
Overall
, national
government provided Correct article usage
the national
huge
Add an article
a huge
amount
of money as compared to other sources
. The local taxes collected low
but in the following Add a missing verb
were low
year
it added the Add a comma
year,
amount
. other sources
of revenue contributed the least amount
. In both
the years
, high
percentage was used on officers and staff salaries. Add an article
a high
Further
, same
Change the article
the same
amount
of money was used for building and transport in both
years
.
To start with, the national government contributed the most for the two years
. That is
, 175.5m and 177.8m respectively. The local taxes were low in 2017 but increased from 91.2m to 102.3m in the following year but the other sources
of income such
as grants had only a rise of 0.5m increase as compared from
the previous year.
Change preposition
to
Nonetheless
, in both
years
, that is
2017 and 2018, high
percentage was utilized on salaries for officers and the Add an article
a high
staffs
Fix the agreement mistake
staff
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
is
75% and 69% of the total Change the verb form
are
amount
respectively. The cost for construction and transport remained constant for all the years
amounting to 17% and as the usage of technology was the least in 2017 with 8%, the figure rose in 2018 to 14%.Submitted by janenjeru6 on
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