The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
The line graph illustrates the amount of consumed carbon dioxide per person in four countries the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal over 40 years from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, British people produced the highest amount of CO2. there was a significant increase in the carbon dioxide emissions in Portugal.
In 1967, the amount of CO2 emissions started at about 11 metric tonnes
and decreased slightly to just under 10 metric tonnes
in 2007 in the UK. While
carbon dioxide from Sweden people was just above 8 metric tonnes
in the beginning then
increased sharply to just above 10 metric tonnes
in 1997 before it dropped dramatically to the lowest level just
under 5 metric Change preposition
of just
tonnes
in the last
year.
Both Italy and Portugal slight increase over the given period. Italy started at above 4 metric tonnes
while
Portugal just
under 2 metric Add a missing verb
was just
tonnes
in 1967. then
they increased gradually ( to just under 8 , and just under 6 metric tonnes
respectively) in last
year.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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