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The diagram below shows how the geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the ingormation by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how the geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the ingormation by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing electricity from geothermal power. The picture depicts five stages of production the artificial light from passing cold liquid through the geothermal zone ,to the generators. First of all,the
pumped down
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 cold water passes through the injection well , a depth
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4.5 km and changes the temperature.Having
heated
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 by hot rocks in a geothermal area ,the hot drink gets into a production well,where it condenses. Once condensed into the vapour condition ,in the fifth stage ,the steam cycles in
turbine
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 and powers it . The strong cycling movement is
accelarated
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accelerated
 in the turbine .In its turn , the turbine produces the ready electrical power and through metal wires
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to
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 electrocuted houses,establishments and different facilities. In general,the scheme shows how cold rain is able to produce
the
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apply
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mighty electrical light.

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