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The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an Industrial area in the town of Norton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The maps clearly illustrate how an Industrial
area
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 in the town of Norbiton is planned to be developed.
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,
it is clear that
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 the layout of
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area
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 is to be transferred to a more urban site, and the roads are to expand, providing both accessibility and convenience for the residents. To the east of the central roundabout, there currently is a
road
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 running east, which is to be expanded with a side
road
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, leading to a new playground. Nearby, a school and a medical
center
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centre
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 are going to be constructed to the east and
eastwest
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east-west
EastWest
 of the
road
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 respectively.
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, all factories housed in
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area
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 at the moment are planned to be demolished, making way for housing. Moving on to the west side of the roundabout, the current open
area
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 is to be occupied by a main
road
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 and some shops.
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, the factories in
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area
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 are to be given place to several housings. There are
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 plans to add another roundabout to the southeast of
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area
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. Looking at the north side of the roundabout, a
road
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 is going to be built which would pass the river, and end at a new housing
area
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. The farmland is going to be relocated to make way for
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 accommodation unit.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
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