You are unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. With a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter : Explain when you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear Sir, madam, I’m writing

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letter because I have information about a plan to make the local

airport

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bigger and increase the number of flights. I have a problem with

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plan.

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, I live 20 meters near the

airport

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. A small village near the

airport

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. From the window of my home , I look at all of the airports. My home is near the

airport

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road, and my garden is near the airstrip. My home is bigger than other houses in the village. Daily, the

mouvements

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movements

of the cars are important. Many cars pass every day at different times near my house. The sound is higher and affects me. I don’t stay in my garden for a long time because

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sound of cars when she passes and I haven't the possibility to

respire

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fresh air. If the development of the

airport

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is realized, the sound will get higher and higher. I will not have the time to rest in my garden. The new

airport

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road will be near my house. It is unacceptable for me and I will have more problems

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the parking of my car.

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flights destroy my daily life and my

privicity

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privacy

. For these reasons, I disagree with

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decision and

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want the help of your newspaper to present my situation for the communities and the administration of the

airport

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your

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yours

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sincerely

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Ensure accurate spelling and grammar to aid clarity and professionalism.

greeting and closing

Clear structure with a proper greeting and closing.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph presents a single idea, aiding clarity.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is appropriately formal for a letter to a newspaper.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

231 words

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