You are unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. With a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter : Explain when you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear Sir, madam, I’m writing

this

letter because I have information about a plan to make the local

airport

bigger and increase the number of flights. I have a problem with

this

plan.

Firstly

, I live 20 meters near the

airport

. A small village near the

airport

. From the window of my home , I look at all of the airports. My home is near the

airport

road, and my garden is near the airstrip. My home is bigger than other houses in the village. Daily, the

mouvements

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movements

of the cars are important. Many cars pass every day at different times near my house. The sound is higher and affects me. I don’t stay in my garden for a long time because

the

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sound of cars when she passes and I haven't the possibility to

respire

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fresh air. If the development of the

airport

is realized, the sound will get higher and higher. I will not have the time to rest in my garden. The new

airport

road will be near my house. It is unacceptable for me and I will have more problems

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the parking of my car.

Much

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flights destroy my daily life and my

privicity

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privacy

. For these reasons, I disagree with

this

decision and

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want the help of your newspaper to present my situation for the communities and the administration of the

airport

your

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yours

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sincerely

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1Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

231 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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