The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below shows the percentage of
students
that attended 4 types of secondary schools
in 2002, 2005, and 2009.
Overall
, Voluntary-controlled schools
were the most popular in the first two years
; but in 2009, they were replaced by community schools
. Specialist schools
and Grammar schools
were the least attendant schools
in all the three years
.
In 2000, 52% of students
attended voluntary-controlled schools
; however
, their popularity decreased significantly over the next two years
, with only 38% of students
attending in 2005 and just 20% in 2009. In contrast
, Community schools
, which were among the least popular schools
in 2000, with only 12% of children in attendance, saw their popularity increase exponentially over the following years
, to 32% in 2005, and 58% in 2009.
With regards to specialist schools
, attendance remained fairly constant for all the 3 years
, between 10-12%. On the other hand
, Grammar schools
accounted for 24% of students
attendance in 2000, which decreased to 19% in 2005, and to 12% in 2009.Change noun form
students'
student's
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