WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.
The table provides key information about the
propution
of national consumption expenditure of five nations Correct your spelling
proportion
on
three sectors in 2002. The units are measured in percentage.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest percentage of the expense
was spent on food and drinks for all countries. Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
In addition
, Turkey has spent the largest amount on food and drinks, whereas
it allocated the smallest expense to leisure and education.
According to
what is shown, Irelandian expense the biggest percentage on food and drink. Then
, spent on clothing and footwear, and leisure and education categories at 6.43% and 2.21% respectively.
In terms of clothing and footwear Italian
Fix the agreement mistake
Italians
were allocate
the highest amount more than other countries. Wrong verb form
allocated
In contrast
, Swedesh
Correct your spelling
Swedish
were
the lowest expenses on clothing and footwear.Verb problem
had
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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